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Christmas is coming soon!
I love Christmas! I'mve been waiting for Christmas break since the summer. Even since last Christmas! This magical atmosphere, heat, lights, mulled wine and a fireplace. I want to celebrate this Christmas with my family, with my close friends too. Not alone... Llike in the last time. It will nNot anymore. We will have the best Christmas holidays! We'll go to a fair and we will buy a lot of cute gifts. We'll meet our best friends and maybe somebody else... We'll sing Christmas songs and we'll laugh. And then a New year will be come. And I believe that the next year will be happier than this year one.
Good job! Merry (upcoming) Christmas and happy 2016!! ;)
Christmas is coming soon!
I love Christmas! I'm waiting for Christmas break since the summer. Even since last Christmas! This magical atmosphere, heat, lights, mulled wine and a fireplace. I want to celebrate this Christmas with my family, with my close friends too. Not alone... Like in last time. It will not anymore. We will have the best Christmas holidays! We'll go to a fair and we will buy a lot of cute gifts. We'll meet our best friends and maybe somebody else... We'll sing Christmas songs and we'll laugh. And then a New year will be. And I believe that the next year will be happier than this year.
I love Christmas! I'm waiting for Christmas break starting from the summer. Even from last Christmas! (Если хочешь оставить since, то надо менять время, но тогда и смысл поменяется). This magical atmosphere, heat, lights, mulled wine and a fireplace. I want to celebrate this Christmas with my family and with my close friends too. Not alone like the last time. (устойчивое выражение, запомни. Просто нельзя дословно переводить "как в последний раз". Кстати, я бы вообще соединила эти 2 предложения союзом but). We will have the best Christmas holidays! We'll go to a fair and we will buy a lot of cute gifts. We'll meet our best friends and maybe somebody else... We'll sing Christmas songs and we'll laugh. And then a New Year will come (тоже устойчивое выражение). And I believe that the next year will be happier than this one (не то чтоб ошибка, но лучше не повторяться, так красивее).
А ты переживаешь! Смотри, как ты хорошо текст составила! :) Дальше - больше! Успехов в изучении английского в новом году!
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