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What is going on in this world now?! To tell the truth I'm in shock! We're living in the XI century and we're smart human beings, with great technologies and nevertheless something wrong in this world, it's seems like it's upside down. In all mass medias we hear the news like from great blockbaster-wars, killing, terrorism... Whose script are we following ? And why don't we enjoy our lives, they are so short...I'm terribly sorry for all that events...

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What is going on in this world now?!

To tell the truth, I'm in shock! We're living in the XXI (21st) century and we're smart human beings, with great technology. * Nevertheless, something is wrong with this world. It's seems like it's upside down. In all the mass medias * we hear the news like (as though) from a great blockbuster-wars, killing, terrorism... Whose script are we following? And why don't we enjoy our lives, as they are so short?...I'm terribly sorry for all these events...

 

* Technology is often treated as a collective noun. Technologies, on the other hand, are countable. This matter is subject to debate, but I think it is best to look at your larger context and consider whether you mean technology as a broader theme or specific technologies.

* Medium is the singular form of the word. Media is the plural form. In practice, we just say media.


It is an excellent essay. Best of luck to you!

 

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