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Alone in the dark forest. Part 5... Alan kept to go upon a wasteland without hope for this madness stop. "The pack of sigarettes is dry, ghosts don't follow me, I'm still alive... What's going on? Why is it happen?" In A few time he arrived unknown village.In contrast of last case this village wasn't solitary. There was many people who did their deals. There was a large marcket deep down in the township. Alan approached to one of sellersand began to talk with him. Seller continued to do own deals as if he didn't hear Alan. Alan treat to another seller but the case repeated "Perhaps, they don't see me" Alan took his flashlight and pointed a light to the sellers face. He didn't show any reaction to this action Alan didn't beleave it. His face began to change and showed a wild fear Where!!?? Am!!?? I !!??

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Alone in the dark forest. Part 5...

Alan kept to go upon a walking through this wasteland without hope for an end to this madness.
"The pack of sigarettes cigarettes is dry, ghosts don't follow aren't following me, I'm still alive... What's going on? Why is it happen? this happening?"
In a few time minutes he arrived in an unknown village. In contrast of last case Unlike the last time, this village wasn't solitary empty. There was were many people who did their were making deals. There was a large market deep down in the township. Alan approached to one of the sellers merchants/vendors/traders and began to talk speak with him.  Seller The merchant/vendor/trader continued to do own make deals as if he didn't hear Alan. Alan treat to another seller but the case repeated tried another merchant/vendor/trader but the same thing happened
"Perhaps, they don't see me"
Alan took out his flashlight and pointed shined a light to on the merchants/vendors/traders sellers face. He didn't show any reaction react. to this action
Alan didn't couldn't believe it. His face began to change and showed a wild fear
Where!!?? Am!!?? I !!??

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