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My first post Here I am, writing down my thoughts and waiting that you, my dear reader, revised my work and teach me something new. Today I've visited a new physio because I've had a pain in my lower back for two weeks now and I've thought that was time to end it. The profesional was a woman, I've never been in a physio woman consult and there is a diference between a man a woman, I think, the pain that the treatment give you is lower with a woman, though maybe I don't have all the data for make this affirmation. And, you can answer me, have your pain disapeared? Well is soon to say, although I don't think so. Thank you in advance.

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My first post

Here I am, writing down my thoughts and waiting that for you, my dear reader, to revised my work and teach me something new.
Today, I've visited a new physio [<---- ¿no se?] because I've had a pain in my lower back for two weeks now and I've thought that it was time for it to end. it. The profesional physio [?] was a woman,. I've never been in a physio had a physio consultation by a woman. consult and t There is a difference between a man and a woman,. I think, The pain that from the treatment give you is lower less with a woman, though maybe I don't have all the data for to make this affirmation assessment. And, you can answer me this question;, have Has your pain disapeared? Well It is too soon to say, although, I don't think so maybe not! 
Thank you in advance.

 

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Here I am, writing down my thoughts and waiting for you, dear reader, to revise my work and teach me something new.

Today, I've visited a new [chiropractor] because I've had pain in my lower back for two weeks and it was time for it to end. The chiropractor was a woman. I've never had a chiropractor consultation by a woman. There is a difference between a man and a woman .he pain from the treatment is less with a woman, though I don't have all the data to make this assessment. And, you can answer this question; Has your pain disappeared? It is too soon to say, although maybe not!

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My first post

Here I am, writing down my thoughts and waiting that for you, my dear reader, revised to check my work and teach me something new.
Today I've I visited a new physio(chiropracter?) because I've had a pain in my lower back for two weeks now and I've I thought that was time to end it. The profesional was a woman, I've never been in to a physio woman chiropracter? consult and there is a diference between a man a woman, I think, the pain that the treatment give you is lower/less with a woman, though maybe I don't have all the data for to make this affirmation/claim. And, you can answer ask me, have has your pain disapeared? Well it is to soon to say, although I don't think so.
Thank you in advance.

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"My dear reader" is not a term that is normally used in everyday speech. I am not sure what a physio is, it sounds like a chiropractor. Espero que tu espalda se sienta mejor pronto.

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