One day
When I got up in the morning,I ate two corns.Then I picked up the book and read it for an hour.I feel tired..I went to balcony to see my flowers,they are so beautiful.I feel comfortable.At noon,I slept for a while and I made a nice dream that I met my old friend as well talked for a long time.Because I have an exam coming up，so I read books all afternoon...It's nice to dinner is delicious.
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One day
When I got up in the morning, I ate two ears of corns. Then I picked up the a book and read it for an hour. I feel felt tired so I went to the balcony to see my flowers, they are so beautiful. I feel comfortable felt relaxed. At noon, I slept for a while and I made had a nice dream that I met my old friend as well and talked for a long time. Because I have an exam coming up，so I read books all afternoon... It's nice to dinner is I had a nice dinner that was delicious.
Thank you for takeing the time to read my essay, if I'm wrong please correct me.
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One day
When I got up in the morning,I ate two corns.Then I picked up the book and read it for an hour.I feel tired..I went to balcony to see my flowers,they are so beautiful.I feel comfortable.At noon,I slept for a while and I made a nice dream that I met my old friend as well talked for a long time.Because I have an exam coming up，so I read books all afternoon...It's nice to dinner is delicious.
Thank you for takeing the time to read my essay,if I'm wrong please correct.
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