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First time for me
Hello,my name is Aya. I am Japanese and 18 years old.
I'd like to speak English better. I am not confident in my English...so please correct me if my English is wrong.
I'm interested in foreign cultures! For example US and UK pop musics, world heritage, foreign lifestyles....and more. I want to visit various countries sometime :) That's why I'd like to speak English better.
Thank you.
Hello Aya and welcome to italki,
there are lots of people here who can help you. You can have a language partner where you talk for say 15 minutes in Japanese and then 15 minutes in English or you can have lessons with a teacher.
You should also write in your notebook regularly, every 2-3 days and read people's corrections to help you learn. It is great if you can help others by correcting their Japanese notebook entries.
You have just a few corrections to your text, you can 'be confident in' or 'have confidence in' and please remember to put a space after commas too.
All the best
Bob
First time for me
Hello,my name is Aya. I am Japanese and 18 years old.
I'd like to speak English better.
I don't am not confident in my English...so please correct me if my English is wrong.
I'm interested in foreign cultures!
For example, US and UK pop musics, the world heritage, foreign lifestyles....and more.
I want to visit various countries sometimes :)
"I want to visit various countries some day/eventually/occasionally"
or "Sometimes I want to visit various countries"
That's why I'd like to speak English better.
Thank you.
First time for me
Hello,my name is Aya. I am Japanese and I'm 18 years old.
I'd like to speak English better.
I don't I'm not confident in/with my English...so please correct me if my English is wrong.
I'm interested in foreign cultures!
For example, US and UK pop musics music, the world heritage,foreign lifestyles....and more.
I want to visit various countries sometimes (I want to visit various countries sometime) :)
That's why I'd like to speak English better.
Thank you.
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