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my life my name is islam , i from in egypt , my hobby are swimming and running but i love more swimming , i live in linked family , consists of 3 person , they are father , mather and sure me . my father is manager in one of large company in hatchery , my mother is good house wife. i study in secondry school ,i don't like studying but i must study to succes

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My Life

My name is Islam and I am from in Egypt.  My hobbies are swimming and running, but i love more swimming more. I live in linked  have a close family which consists of 3 person people. They are my father, my mother and sure of course, me.  My father is the manager in one of largest companies in (اين؟) hatchery and my mother is a good house wife. I study in secondary school. I  don't like studying, but i must study to succeed.

Good work Islam! Remember to use definite articles (the, those, etc.) and indefinite articles ( a).  When you join two complete sentences in one, try to use a conjunction such as (and, but, so, etc).  Keep writing!

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My Life

My name is Islam. I am from Egypt. My hobbies are swimming and running but prefer swimming. I live in linked family , consists of 3. They are my father, my mother and sure myself. My father is a manager in a big company in Hatchery.   My mother is a good house wife. I study in secondry school. I don't like study but i must study to succes.

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