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A letter to a friend Writing task 1 (a letter) You have met an old friend in another city on your last business trip. Now you are going on another business trip in the same city and want to meet him/her again. Write a letter to your friend and say - Express your excitement about the last meeting. - Give details about your new business trip. - Suggest an arrangement to meet again. Dear Bob, How is everything going there? I hope this finds you and your family well. I was really freaking out when I ran into you during my month's business trip to Singapore. I had never expected that you are living that amazing city. I want to let you know that I am going on another trip at the beginning of next month, and hoping to see you again. This trip will started on 1st August and last for a fortnight. I will be busing with my work on weekends, and have nothing related to business on weekends. So that will be the good time for us to meet each other. As did last time, I will be staying in Sunshine Hotel, close to you home. I want to visit your home this time, and hope you and your family will treat me. Maybe we don't need to eat out. Just make some Cantonese food at home. See you later. Lots of love, Jim.

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A letter to a friend

Writing task 1 (a letter)

You have met an old friend in another city on your last business trip. Now you are going on another business trip in the same city and want to meet him/her again. Write a letter to your friend and say
- Express your excitement about the last meeting.
- Give details about your new business trip.
- Suggest an arrangement to meet again.



Dear Bob,

How is everything going over there? I hope this letter finds you and your family well.

I was really freaking out when I ran into you during my month's montly business trip to Singapore. I had would have never expected that you are living for you to live in that amazing city. I want to let you know that I am going on another trip at the beginning of next month, and I am hoping to see you again.

This trip will started starts on 1st August 1st and lasts for a fortnight two weeks. I will be busing busy with my work on weekends weekdays* and have nothing related to business on weekends. So that will be the good time for us to meet each other. As I did last time, I will be staying in the Sunshine Hotel, close to your home.

I want would like to visit your home this time and hope you and your family will treat me* join us. Maybe we don't need to eat out. Just make some Cantonese food at home, we can try to make some Cantonese food at home. See you later.

Lots of love,

Jim.

 

Hello hitperson, my suggestions for your assignment are in blue. Hope you find them useful.
* I was a little confused as to what you were trying to say here, but I think you just mixed up weekdays and weekend.
*While not incorrect, saying, "...hope you and your family will treat me.." sounds a little rude and forward. Corrected for politeness, not necessarily grammar.

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