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Difficulty sleeping Difficulty sleeping Sleeping is a process in which human's body recovers its energy. If people couldn't sleep very well, they would not have enough energy to do their routines, think very well etc. In my opinion, insomnia is one of the new problems of people who live in the progressive societies. Based on scientific contexts there are some solutions to overcome this problem. First, don't drink coffee or tea 2 hours before your bedtime; these beverages are full of caffeine which is a type of chemical substances that might disturb your sleeping. Second, don't go to bed until you will be sleepy. Some experiments shows that going to bed before bedtime, makes people bad sleeper. Third, try to get away stress from yourself; relax your body and think about good things and breathe deeply until falling asleep. Finally, try to exercise more and more; exercising will make your body tired and your soul free of stress, so you will fall asleep automatically. In addition make an exercise is very useful to your body.

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Difficulty sleeping

Difficulty sleeping

Sleeping is a process in which human's our bodyies recovers its energy. If When people couldncan't sleep very well, they would do not have receive enough energy to do their normal routines, think effectively very well and so on etc. In my opinion, insomnia is one of the newer problems of people who liveing in the progressive societies. According to Based on scientific research contexts, there are some solutions to overcome this problem. 


First, don't drink coffee or tea 2 hours before your bedtime; these beverages are full of caffeine which is a type of chemical substances that might disturb your sleeping. Second, don't go to bed until you actually feel will be sleepy. Some experiments shows that going to bed before bedtime, develops bad sleeping habitsmakes people bad sleeper. Third, try to let go of the get away stress from still clinging to yourself; relax your body and think about good things and breathe deeply until you falling asleep. Finally, try to exercise more and more; exercising will make your body tired and free your soul free of stress, letting so you will fall asleep naturallyautomatically. In addition, make an exerciseing is very beneficial useful to your body's healthy development.

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Difficulty sleeping

Sleeping is a process in which the human's body recovers its energy. If people a person couldn't doesn't sleep very well enough, they he/she would not have enough energy to do their routines, think very well, etc. In my opinion, insomnia is one of the a new problem of people who live in the progressive societies. Based on scientific contexts findings there are some solutions to overcome this problem.

First, don't drink coffee or tea 2 hours before your bedtime; these beverages are full of caffeine which is a type of chemical substance that might disturb your sleeping. Second, don't go to bed until you will be are sleepy. Some experiments show that going to bed before bedtime makes people bad sleeper sleep worse. Third, try to get away stress from yourself get rid of your stress; relax your body, and think about good things, and breathe deeply until falling you asleep. Finally, try to exercise more and more frequently. Exercising will make your body tired and your soul free of stress, so you will fall asleep automatically. In addition, make an exercise is very useful beneficial for to your body.

 

Hi 梅迪, while your writing wasn't entirely incorrect, I made some suggestions so your writing is more fluid and less awkward.

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Great writing! Do you have trouble with insomnia? I drink a lot of coffee and may be slightly addicted myself. Overall, you've got good vocabulary, but you might want to use slightly more formal words when talking about something scientific. Also, as many of the things you talked about were natural things, using the highly hypothetical "would" and "could" in conditionals don't make sense. Best of luck with your studies! And I like your avatar pic!

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