robert's notebook entry: Mar 10, 2011
(To one my friend: Your composition has inspired me to give an alternative version. I am not a teacher, I am not qualify to correct anything and I am sure my version is full of mistakes and errors. But by doing so, I practice my English writing skill.I make it as my composition and expect some people give his/her generous correction)
It is women’s day today. I got half a day off as holiday. I went to KTV with my colleagues. I was so happy today. We sang many songs in the KTV. Besides, we have a deep talk. There were some songs that reflect my current situation and make my emotion fluctuated accordingly. I like music, and I like songs that with story background.
I was so happy that he call me today.
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robert's notebook entry: Mar 10, 2011
(ToIt is Women's Day today. I got half a day off as holiday. I went to KTV with my colleagues. I was so happy today. We sang many songs in the KTV. Besides, we have a deep talk. There were some songs that reflect my current situation and make my emotion fluctuated accordingly. I like music, and I like songs that with story behind.
I was so happy that he called me today.
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