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My Presentation
Hello, my name is Antoine. I am 14 years old, (and) soon 15 because I was born on December the 31st in Paris, the capital of France, in the 19th district. I have got brown hair and eyes and I've got glasses. {or "I wear glasses"}
My mother is named Stéphanie, she is 41 years old and she practices dance with our neightbour. As for my father, he is 43 years old and he's named Emmanuel, and he really likes football.
I have got one little brother and one little sister who are respectively 11 and 5 five* years old. My brother's name is Maxime and my sister's name is Oriane.
My brother was born on February the 7th and he practices plays tennis table. FinnalyLastly, {Finally} my sister was born on July the 4th and she does dances. {or "takes dance classes"}
As for me, I have a lot of hobbies. I really love art and drawings, I make drawings {or sketch} when I have the time. I draw all kinds of things: flowers, landscape, abstract objects… I practices have been fencing {or "sport fencing"} for 8 eight years now. And as of last year, I had played violin for 7 seven years. The Learning about Japan and Japanese language are one of my other hobbies, I learning Japanese in through self-education** because in the future, I would like to go to Japan and maybe live over there. My last passion is the one I prefer most***, it's computer programming. I love creating games or software, and or also building websites. Moreover, later on, I would like to be a developer.
As for the European section, when I am at attend the high school, in my high school there is a European section and, as since there isn't wasn't a spain Spanish section like in my college junior high school,**** (or middle school) I wanted to attend this section. It's very quite {or "a lot of"} fun and we learn a lot of English, we participate to in the life of the high school when there are pupils_from another country who come to the school. For example last week, we did a treasure hunt with the a German and an Italian.
*Numbers up to ten are spelled out.
**Or "I am teaching myself Japanese" or "I am an autodidact in my Japanese learning".
***In English "passion préférée" is more like "my favorite passion"
****école primaire => elementary school; collège => junior high school, middle school; lycée => high school
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