Please correct these sentences

1. Ann is a so CLUELESS person, that we have to ENLIGHTEN her .

Ann is a clueless person , so we have to enlighten her

2. Ton's answer is really DUBIOUS, because he is sure that he is WELL-versed in that DOMAIN, indeed he is not AWARE there totally.

Tom's answer (really)is still dubious, even if he thinks he is well-versed in that domain/subject/field of knowledge because he is totally not aware of it.

3. Ann has an AFFECTION towards Tom's COMPANION. Ann's KIN notices their COURTSHIP.

Ann has affection for Tom , and Ann's kin are aware of their courtship .

Tom's companion for the party will be Ann.

Has affection for /has a deep affection/ has a great affection for . Affection is already A feeling of fondness . Unless you use adjective as above.

4. A rainbow has a shape of an ARC. A rainbow is shaped like an arc.

5. I am DOZING all day long because I am feeling WEARY (from all the work I had done)

I am dozing all day long because I am tired.

Use tired if you are exhausted , and weary when you tired from something , and better to explain what it was that made  you to be .

I need to rest my weary eyes.The miners were weary after a long shift.She was weary from years of housework

6. I have discovered a hole on in my dress, so I am going to make an invisible PATCH/ hidden patch.

Hidden is cannot be seen because its placed in a place that is hard to see/invisible means you can see because your eyes can detect it anywhere . The patch is invisible to you from the outside because its hidden underneath .

7. A The rabbit is hiding in its BURROW, OTHERWISE it will feel INSECURE.

A rabbit likes to hide in a burrow ,otherwise it can easily be seen by a fox

'Otherwise' used here for both above is just 'if not' .

8. This company FABRICATES clothes using similar PATTERNS for all its range/ models. ??

This company make clothes using cloth of similar design/pattern for all its range .

This company fabricates its product from components that are imported.

Fabricate> to assemble from parts . Frabricate is to build more than to make

http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/fabricate

9. We had a CONTROVERSY - Is an APE a KIN of a man? We were DEBATIND during two hours, but we didn't find solution.

There was a heated controversy over the following proposition " apes are related to humans . We were debating on it for 2 hours without coming to a conclusion.

There was a controversy over this : Are apes related to humans ?

Controversy >a situation arising from different points of views that are conflicting .So, you cant say you have a controversy . Its a situation or something that doesnt belong to any one > You cant have it . Just say : there is a controversy as in there is 'conflicting points of views'

Solution> an answer which solve a problem . To debate is not to solve . Its to find who is right

Conclusion > the final acceptable answer/statement for something

I have gone through all your the solutions that you have proposed. I shall let you know my conclusions on them soon

10. You are a NARCISSIST. You have INHERITED your temper vanity from your father.

Narcissist > someone who has too much admiration for himself or herself . Nothing to do with temper!

Vanity> the fact that you are too interested in your appearance or achievements.