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第一个雪 天气今天冷。后天和今天第一个雪来了。还是现在天气很热雪不可以在。它来土壤和溶化。 我喜欢雪还是在城市得到赃物很快的。我希望我们可以都年有冬天。都得是永远的冷。生命是冷,人是冷和冬天是社会太好的表达方式。 TRANSLATION The first snow Today the weather is cold. Yesterday and today the first snow came. But it is still too warm for the snow to stay. It melts as soon as it hits the ground. I like snow but in the city it gets dirty fast. I wish we could have winter the whole year. Everything shall stay cold forever. Life is cold, people are cold and winter is the perfect expression of our society. (My first Chinese notebook entry after a long time not knowing what to write so this one is also very small and surely full of mistakes, sorry about that.)

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初雪

今天天气很冷。从昨天到今天迎来了第一场雪。不过现在温度比较暖和,雪无法凝聚,它一碰到大地就溶化了。

我喜欢雪,可是城市使得雪花很快变脏。我希望我们可以一年四季都处于寒冬,让一切事物都永远凝固。生命是冷漠的,人们也是冷血的。这寒冬正好表达了社会的冷淡。 


(I wish you would be happy, for I believe the love )

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第一场雪

天气今天很冷。后天昨天,和今天第一场雪来了。但是现在温度还有些高,雪掉在地上不可以在很快就融化了。它来土壤和溶化。

我喜欢雪,但是在城市得到赃物很快的雪脏的很快。我希望我们可以都年有一整年都是冬天。都得是永远的冷所有的一切都是冷的。生命是冰冷的,人是冰冷的,和冬天是对这个冰冷社会太好的完美诠释。

TRANSLATION

The first snow

Today the weather is cold. Yesterday and today the first snow came. But it is still too warm for the snow to stay. It melts as soon as it hits the ground.

I like snow but in the city it gets dirty fast. I wish we could have winter the whole year. Everything shall stay cold forever. Life is cold, people are cold and winter is the perfect expression of our society.

(My first Chinese notebook entry after a long time not knowing what to write so this one is also very small and surely full of mistakes, sorry about that.)

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第一场雪

天气今天冷。后天和今天第一个雪来了。还是现在天气很热雪不可以在。它来土壤和溶化。
--今天天气很冷,从昨天到今天下了第一场雪。尽管天气冷,但是大地还很暖,雪落在地上融化了。
我喜欢雪还是在城市得到赃物很快的。我希望我们可以都年有冬天。都得是永远的冷。生命是冷,人是冷和冬天是社会太好的表达方式。
--我喜欢雪但是它很快就会变脏。我希望我们整年都是冬天。永恒严寒。生命是冰冷的,人们是冷漠的,冬天是社会的最好表达。
TRANSLATION

The first snow

Today the weather is cold. Yesterday and today the first snow came. But it is still too warm for the snow to stay. It melts as soon as it hits the ground.

I like snow but in the city it gets dirty fast. I wish we could have winter the whole year. Everything shall stay cold forever. Life is cold, people are cold and winter is the perfect expression of our society.

(My first Chinese notebook entry after a long time not knowing what to write so this one is also very small and surely full of mistakes, sorry about that.)

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第一个(场)雪

天气今天(的天气)冷。后天和今天第一个雪来了。(等一场雪从昨天下到今天。)还是(但是)现在天气很热(暖和)雪不可以在(呆不住)。它来土壤和溶化(一碰到大地就溶化了)。

我喜欢雪还是(但是)在城市得到赃物很快的(里雪脏得快)。我希望我们可以都(全)年有(都是)冬天。(每一件东西)都得是永远(都是)的冷。生命是冷(的),人是冷(的),和冬天是(我们的)社会太(最)好的表达方式。

TRANSLATION

The first snow

Today the weather is cold. Yesterday and today the first snow came. But it is still too warm for the snow to stay. It melts as soon as it hits the ground.

I like snow but in the city it gets dirty fast. I wish we could have winter the whole year. Everything shall stay cold forever. Life is cold, people are cold and winter is the perfect expression of our society.

(My first Chinese notebook entry after a long time not knowing what to write so this one is also very small and surely full of mistakes, sorry about that.)

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第一个场雪

天气今天的天真冷。后天和今天昨天我们迎来了第一个场雪来了。这场雪一直持续到今天。还但是现在天气的温度还是很热有些高,雪不可以在。它来土壤和溶落到地上很快就融化了。

我喜欢下雪,还但是在城市里,雪得到赃物脏得很快的。我希望我们可以都年有一年四季都是冬天。所有东西都可以得是永远那么冷。生命是冷酷的,人是冷漠的,寒冷的冬天不正是对这个冰冷的社会太好的表达方式最好诠释吗? 

 

Hey, this society is not that cold. Try find the warm part of it:) Happy Monday!

 


TRANSLATION

The first snow

Today the weather is cold. Yesterday and today the first snow came. But it is still too warm for the snow to stay. It melts as soon as it hits the ground.

I like snow but in the city it gets dirty fast. I wish we could have winter the whole year. Everything shall stay cold forever. Life is cold, people are cold and winter is the perfect expression of our society.

(My first Chinese notebook entry after a long time not knowing what to write so this one is also very small and surely full of mistakes, sorry about that.)

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