I live in Alhambra, California. There is an Alhambra market near my home. I like it because it has discounts on vegetables every Wednesday and Thursday. Sometimes I pay with my credit card when buying big things.

I skipped this sentence because I wasn't sure of the meaning: "I need much closthes and I want to pay whit cash ". Everything else was almost perfect, great job! If you read the way that I wrote your sentences, it is almost the same with minor corrections in punctuation and the general phrasing.

Good job!