Please help me to amend the composition20151122-My country-Inner Mongolia

There is a grassland , which is called Hulun Buir, in the northeast of Inner Mongolia...ok The grassland is the most famous natural pasture in the world. There is not high mountains and trees, it is only has beautiful blue sky, fleecy white clouds,tercel fly in the sky,green grassland likes carpet,the stream like a fishing net,herds of cattle and sheep,running horse,clean and white tent,fresh air

There is a grassland in Northeast of Inner Mongolia called Hulun Buir. The grassland is the most famous natural pasture in the world .

It does not have high mountains or trees /It is mountainless and treeless:it just has a flat monotonous terrain, like how a good pasture should be.

It  has a beautiful blue sky with fleecy white clouds . Teircels would be flying in the sky overlooking a grassland that seems like a giant green carpet, a stream that lazily snakes its way through it/ look like a fishing net??.

On the pasture,with its clean fresh air , herds of cattle and sheeps can be seen , together with running horses and clean white tents .

Please help me to amend the composition20151122-My country-Inner Mongolia

There is a grassland (which is) called Hulun Buir in the northeast of Inner Mongolia, (the grassland is) the most famous natural pasture in the world. There is are not high mountains, and or trees; [it is only has]/just beautiful blue sky, fleecy white clouds, tercels fly in the sky, green grassland likes a carpet, the streams like a fishing net, herds of cattle and sheep, running horses, clean and white tents, and fresh air.

Do you come from this region ?