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My Grumble "Why you always see negative point?"
Hey, I'd like to say why you (people; I guess you're talking about one specific person though) always see negative points??
I have (I've) told you many times I don't see the negative things.
Recently, I'm I've been busy because of my (you could just say homework) homework and my charity project so I asked you that if you could please (<-- you could take please out) wait for a while,. Then (<-- you could take this out) you told me that it's it was ok. I will not annoy you by touching you ("You even said, "I won't annoy you").
I understood understand that you understood my situation at that time. But after a day later, you wrote in on FB like this way and said, "I was ignored" (<- "I'm being ignored")
Why!?!??! You don't understand me anymore!! I feel sad (I think "That makes me sad" would be used more). I think that people should see the positive points if it's happened something harsh (we would use bad here) thing.
In this case, we can keep in touch as soon as when I finish my things which I have to do,. But you always see and think negative points (use things) which is why we can't keep in touch. You have to open your eyes and mind!!
I'm finished!!
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