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Avoiding the sun. **Please correct my English. Any help would be appreciated. :)** My face has gotten darker because of the sun. My friends said "What happened to your face? It looks burnt. Seriously, where did you went to?". Actually the only reason is that I only went to classes by walking! lol It is not a big deal. It is not like I went to the beach or something. I don't know why my face always gotten dark easily. I tried to wear the umbrella everytime but you know what, it didn't really have an effect. Alternately, if I am on a vacation for like months, my friends will say "Why your skin looks brighter? What compact powder are you wearing? " lol Wearing some night cream would make my face got burnt faster if I am not mistaken because it will make my face's skin thinner is it? I don't know since I only heard about it from some of my friends. Right now I just gave up. I'll just have to bear with the sun for 3 and a half year till I graduate from my school I guess.

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Avoiding the sun.

**Please correct my English. Any help would be appreciated. :)**

My face has gotten darker because of the sun.
My friends said "What happened to your face? It looks burnt. Seriously, where did you go to?". Actually, the reason is that I walked to my classes! lol It is not a big deal. It is not like I went to the beach or something. I don't know why my face gets dark easily. I tried using the umbrella everytime but you know what, it didn't really have an effect.

Alternately, if I am on a vacation for like months, my friends will say "Why does your skin look brighter? What compact powder are you wearing? " lol

Wearing night cream would make my face get burnt faster. if I am not mistaken, it will make my face skin thinner. Would it? I don't know since I only heard about it from one of my friends. So, I just gave up. I'll have to bear with the sun for 3 and a half years till I graduate from my school I guess.

 

Good job!!!! :)

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