A wonderfeul day
Today is a busy day. Actually, the work is not hard for me. But there is too much accidents Suddly happens. when I went to the office this morning . My colleague told me that the goods's thread color is not correct, she ask me "what happen?", I am very worried about that. I put downtown the bag to hurry up and run to the workshop to check and found that it was a false alarm. after a while, my buyyer called me , She told me that the Tie's fabric is not good, she sounds very angry, I also very mad, because this fabric is her choice, but I can't say anything, I told she that I will try my best to do my best. oh, A wonderful day.
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A Wonderful Day
Today is a busy day. Actually, the work is not hard for me. But there have been too many accidents. It happened suddenly when I went to the office this morning . My colleague told me that the goods' thread color is not correct; and, she asked me "what happened?", I was very worried about that. ["I was very worried about that." might be better because you are speaking about something in the past]. I put down the bag to hurry up and run to the workshop to check and found that it was a false alarm. After a while, my buyer called me. She told me that the Tie's fabric is (was) not good. She sounded very angry. I was very mad also because this fabric was her choice. But I can't say anything. I told her that I will try to do my best. Oh, a wonderful day.
Lilian - very good. Most of the corrections are about present tense vs. past tense (It happens is in the present. It happened is about the past). Hope you have a better day tomorrow!
Pete
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