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My dog I have a lovely dog in my home. She is a girl, her name is LiuLiu. Today, my story is about my dog LiuLiu. LiuLiu is every clever and good-looking dog. She has a big tail, pink and black nose. Her skin is white and black. Her body is as big as my body. Her face is look like a wolf. Sometimes LiuLiu is walking in the park, some kids scream "The big wolf is coming" and scare her, But LiuLiu has a good temp, she never chase kids, even barking or howling. But She really want to chase the small animals, like as rabbits,chicken or duck. Last month, my family camped in the countryside, LiuLiu came with us. She saw the swimming ducks in the river, LiuLiu has never chase the swimming ducks before, so she was very exciting. Finally, LiuLiu jumped into the river and began chasing the swimming ducks. But the ducks in river were running faster than LiuLiu, five minutes late, LiLiu was tired and gave up the chasing and came back. All the persons at the bank laughed LiuLiu. Although LiuLiu standed at the bank, She still stared at the ducks. "How naught dog! ", but I still love her.

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My dog

I have a lovely dog at in my home. She is a girl, Her name is LiuLiu. Today, my story is about my dog LiuLiu. LiuLiu is a  every clever and good-looking dog. She has a big tail, and a pink and black nose. Her coat/fur  skin is white and black. Her body is as big as my body. Her face is look like a wolf. Sometimes when LiuLiu is walking in the park, some kids scream "The big wolf is coming" and they scare her. But LiuLiu has a good temperament , she never chases kids, or barks even barking or howls. But she really wants to chase the small animals, like as rabbits, chickens or ducks. Last month, my family camped in the countryside, LiuLiu came with us. She saw the swimming ducks in the river, LiuLiu has never chased the swimming ducks before, so she was very excited exciting. Finally, LiuLiu jumped into the river and began chasing the swimming ducks. But the ducks in the river were swimming  running faster than LiuLiu, and five minutes later, LiLiu was tired and gave up the chase and came back. All the people on  persons at the bank laughed at LiuLiu. Although LiuLiu was standing on standed at the bank, she continued to stare still stared at the ducks. "How naught What a naughty dog! ", but I still love her.

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