Weekend

It was about nine A.M.(1) On a Saturday morning when we arrived at Ixtapa. First of all, we visited our uncle. We stayed there for an hour. Then we went to the beach. We got there at eleven o'clock(2). There were a lot of tourists because it was a holiday. I saw many foreigners visitors too. After having lunch, when finished and finishing up the day, we went home and had dinner, watched a movie with popcorn and went to the bed at 12 o’clock. The next day we went to get breakfast to at the new restaurant. The food went was amazing. It was a perfect weekend. I would like to repeat it again. I usually have a weekend very boring weekend where I normally watch movies alone. and I always have to cook always and I can't order a pizza or something like that because it's more expensive. If I want to save money, I have to cook every day.

(1) It's just easier to write the time as a number (9:00am)

(2) Same thing

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Weekend

It was around nine on a Saturday morning we arrived at Ixtapa. First of all we visited our uncle. We stayed there for an hour. Then we went to the beach. We got there at eleven o'clock. There were a lot of tourists because it was holiday. I saw loads of foreign visitors too. After having lunch, nearing the end of the day, we went home,had dinner, watched a movie with popcorn and went to bed at 12 o’clock at night. The next day we went to a new restaurant to have breakfast, the food was amazing. It was a perfect weekend. I would like to repeat it again. My weekends are usually very boring, I normally watch movies alone, and I have to always cook, I can't order a pizza or other takeout because it's expensive. If I want to save money, I have to cook every day.