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Welcome friends. There is more information about me.
I graduated in a university with a degree in commerce. Than I worked at the University as a teacher. After that I opened a tanning studio (solariums). I had my own business for about three years. And now I am a student again. I study hairdressing to transform my tan studio into a beauty salon with full range of services. I like to read fiction, learn foreign languages and travel. First of all I would like to visit Monaco, Singapore, Paris, and Venice. And I have an idea to go to UAE in April for few months to earn some money. I have been to UAE twice. I love the country. And also I have been to Spain. It was an interesting trip too.
I'm not an English native speaker. I've corrected only what is obvious to me.
I graduated from a university with a degree in commerce. Then I worked in the University as a teacher. After that, I opened a tanning studio (solariums). I've had been running my own business for about three years. And now I am a student again.
Welcome friends. Here is more information about me.
I graduated from a university with a degree in commerce. Then I worked at the University as a teacher. After that, I opened a tanning studio (Solariums). I had my own business for about three years. And now I am a student again. I study hairdressing to transform my tanning studio into a beauty salon with a full range of services. I like to read fiction, learn foreign languages and travel. First of all I would like to visit Monaco, Singapore, Paris and Venice. Also I have an idea to go to UAE in April for a few months to earn some money. I have been to UAE twice. I love the country. And also I have been to Spain. It was an interesting trip too.
Welcome friends. Here is more information about me.
I graduated from a university with a degree in commerce. Then I worked in the University as a teacher. After that, I opened a tanning studio (Solariums). I had my own business about three years. And now I am a student again. I study hairdressing to transform my tan studio into a beauty salon with a full range of services. I like to read fiction, learn foreign languages and travel. First of all I would like to visit Monaco, Singapore, Paris and Venice. And I have an idea to go to UAE in April for few months to earn some money. I have been to UAE twice. I love the country. And also I have been to Spain. It was an interesting trip too.
Welcome friends! Here is more information about me.
I graduated from university with a degree in commerce. Then, I worked at the university as a teacher. After that, I opened a tanning studio (Solariums). I had my own business for about three years and now I am a student again. I study hairdressing to transform my tan studio into a beauty salon, with a full range of services. I like to read fiction, learn foreign languages and travel. First of all, I would like to visit Monaco, Singapore, Paris and Venice. And I have a plan idea to go to the UAE in April for a few months to earn some money. I have been to the UAE twice. I love this country and I have also been to Spain. It was an interesting trip too.
Lovely write up, just a few minor errors. Feel free to write to me, if you require assistance with your English. Have a lovely day! =)
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