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Describing a Bar Chart fot IELTS W1, Please check it :) The bar chart provides the information about the proportion of men and women in the UK who has not got any qualification. In particular, it divides people into six age groups. The percentage for people who are under 39 years is less than 10 percent for both genders. For the two first groups, 17-19 and 20-24, the percentage of incompetent men is greater than the percentage of incompetent women. There is no difference in proportions between women and men who are between 25-29 and 30-39. By contrast, after the age of 40 both proportions start to grow. There is 10 % of males lacked qualification and 11 % of females. The percentage reaches 20 % for women after 50 and 17 % for men after 50. Overall, the bar chart illustrates a small difference in the number of males and females without qualification. By the age of 50-59/64 this number increases dramatically.

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Describing a Bar Chart fot IELTS W1, Please check it :)

This bar charts provide information about the proportion of men and women in the UK who don't have any qualifications. Particularly, it divides people into six age groups. The percentage of people who are under 39 years are less than 10 percent for both genders. For the two first groups, 17-19 and 20-24, the percentage of incompetent men is greater than the percentage of incompetent women. There are no differences in proportions between women and men who are between 25-29 and 30-39. By contrast, after the age of 40 both proportions start to grow. There is 10 % of males lacking qualifications and 11 % of females. The percentage reaches 20 % for women after 50 and 17 % for men after 50.
Overall, the bar chart illustrates a small difference in the number of males and females lacking qualifications. By the age of 50-59/64 this number increases dramatically.

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