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older people opinion about us "youngers" Today when I left my home it was too early and rainy outside. While walking a bit I met an old woman who stand under the red light without an umbrella with. She was wet from head to toe. I watched on her and feel so sad. Suddenly (for her) i whispered "Mrs my umbrella is too big for me would you like to join me and take your place under it"? She surprised a bit from my question. Her shock took only a min after which I see her under my umbrella. You may ask why shock? You can get your answer if keep up reading. She asked me where I keep my way, If we have the same way to walk so I told her to not worry about that. On our way walking I ask her why adults think that youngers like me are a bad persons. This time it was my turn to get a shock from her answers (lool). "Youngers are very rude and uneducated nowadays, you have no patience. You want all and to right now".I started to smile and try to sure her that maybe she's right but not all are the same, we all are different and no need to be so aggressive. It was very important for me to change her point about us (youngers) so I help her to get the place she needs. She was very happy about that. So finally i can say that she really made my all day. Please correct my "short" text. ^_^

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Older peoples opinions about "youngsters"

When I left my home today it was too early and raining outside. While walking, I met an old woman who stood under the red light without an umbrella. She was wet from head to toe. I watched her and felt so sad. Suddenly, I whispered "Mrs, my umbrella is too big for me- would you like to join me and take your place under it"? She seemed a bit surprised by my question. She seemed shocked for a minute, but then came underneath my umbrella. You may ask me why she was shocked? You can get your answer if you keep reading! She asked me where I was going and if we were walking the same way. I told her to not worry about that. As we continued walking, I ask her why adults think that youngsters like me are bad people. This time it was my turn to get a shock from her answers (lol).
     "Youngsters are very rude and uneducated nowadays, you have no patience! You want it all right now!" I started to smile, and tried to reassure her that maybe she's right, but we are all different and there is no need to be so aggressive.
     It was very important for me to change her mind about us (the "youngsters"). So I decided to help her to get the place she needed to be. She was very happy about that!
     So I can finally say that she made my day.




Please correct my "short" text. ^_^

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