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Part two:Travelling, one of my hobbies. Do you like to travel by yourself or with accompany?I think these two ways have their own benefits. Travelling by yourself, you won't think about adjusting your schedule because of your parners. You can decide when to start your trip and when to end it. That's say come away trip,which is just like a free bird flying in the sky. Don't worry about being lonely during the trip, if you want, you can make many friends there, even like-mind ones. If you put yourself into the trip, you will love everything you meet, the food, the scenery, the peole,and the interesting things you have never seen before. At that time, your curiosity has taken up your heart, you won't feel boring and lonely, but really want to remenber all of wonderful and beautiful moments deeply. However, if you are a person who is afarid of being alone, you can't deserve( or get?)such a fantastic experience. In this case, you can go travelling with accompany. Certainly, travelling with accompany is another good choice. It would you more convenient in some situations, such as taking photos. Have you ever thought that having meal with people is better than eating by yourself?You can share food and talk with somebody at the table. That's great things for me. I think you must meet a following situation: you reallly want to taste all yummy food you see, but you just have a small stomach. So what can you do for it? Now your partner plays an important role here. If you and your partners are foodies, wow, your trip will become a culinary journey. What's more, when you meet emergency you won't expect, your partner will give you a hand in time. If you want to visit some places where are not safe enough, you'd better not to go by yourself. ‘That is it today. I will continue to finish it next time. Welcome to correct my article, my dear friends on italki'

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Part two: Traveling, one of my hobbies.

Do you like to travel by yourself or with company?I think these two ways each have their own benefits. Traveling by yourself, you won't think about adjusting your schedule because of your partners. You can decide when to start your trip and when to end it. That's say come away trip, which is just like a free bird flying in the sky. Don't worry about being lonely during the trip, if you want, you can make many friends there, even like-mind ones.

If you put yourself into the trip, you will love everything you experience, the food, the scenery, the people, and interesting things you have never seen before. By that time, your curiosity will have taken up your heart, you won't feel bored and lonely, but really want to remember all of those wonderful and beautiful moments deeply.

However, if you are a person who is afraid of being alone, you can't enjoy such a fantastic experience. In this case, you can go traveling with company  (alternatively you could say "a friend"). Certainly, traveling with company is another good choice. It would be  more convenient in some situations, such as taking photos. Have you ever thought that having a meal with people is better than eating by yourself?You can share food and talk with somebody at the table. Those are great things for me. Imagine the following situation: you really want to taste all the yummy food you see, but you just have a small stomach. So what can you do? Now your partner plays an important role here. If you and your partner are foodies, wow, your trip will become a culinary journey. What's more, when you have an unexpected emergency, your partner will give you a hand.

If you want to visit some places which are not safe enough, you'd better not to go by yourself.

‘That is it today. I will continue to finish it next time. You are welcome to correct my article, my dear friends on italki'

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'Yummy' is a word used by children and I don't know anyone that would use it while speaking with another adult. Of course some adults do use it while speaking to their children.

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