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How I spent my day today(Part 1) I woke up at 6 a.m. today, walked up to the window to draw apart the blinds, drew them apart, but it was still dark in the room. I went out to the balcony, it was rather cold outside, from what I gathered that I would have to dress warmly when I left my house. I returned to the room, where it was still dark, drew the blinds and put the lights on. I went to the bathroom and took a shower quickly. After all this I went to the kitchen and turned on the TV, then came up to the fridge and took mashed potatos out of it, put it onto a plate, and put the plate into the microwave oven. While the potatos were being cooked in the microwave, I took a couple of eggs out of the fridge, broke them and poured onto a pan so I could make myself an omelette. I also took a couple of sausages out of the fridge and threw them into a saucepan to be cooked. Meanwhile they were giving the weather forecast on the TV for today, they were saying it would be cold and that it would rain. I'd heard a signal from the microwave oven before I was done with listening to the weather forecast, which meant my potatos had already been cooked. I took the potatos out of the microwave, removed my omelette from the pan, and pulled the sausages out of the saucepan. While I was eating, they were giving the news on the TV. I had finished my breakfast before half an hour had passed. Then, having washed my hands, I put on clothes, took an umbrella with me and went out.

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How I spent my day today(Part 1)

I woke up at 6 a.m. today, went over to the window to draw open the blinds and drew them open, but it was still dark in the room. I went out to the balcony. It was rather cold outside, and from what I gathered I would have to dress warmly when I left my house. I returned to the room, where it was still dark, drew the blinds and put the lights on. I went to the bathroom and took a quick shower. After all this I went to the kitchen and turned on the TV, then went over to the fridge and took some mashed potatos out, put them on a plate, and put the plate into the microwave oven. While the potatos were cooking in the microwave, I took a couple of eggs out of the fridge, broke them and poured them into a pan so I could make myself an omelette. I also took a couple of sausages out of the fridge and threw them into a saucepan to be cooked. Meanwhile they were giving today's weather forecast on the TV, they were saying it would be cold and that it would rain. I'd heard the signal from the microwave before I was done with listening to the weather forecast, which meant my potatos were already cooked. I took the potatos out of the microwave, removed my omelette from the pan, and took the sausages out of the saucepan. While I was eating, they were reading the news on the TV. I had finished my breakfast before half an hour had passed. (This is gramatically correct but I think "half an hour later I had finished my breakfast" or "it took me half an hour to finish my breakfast" sound better) Then, having washed my hands, I put on clothes, took an umbrella with me and went out.

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