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Sports I have played sports for a long time. My first sport has been figure skating and I started that when I was 2 years and half and this sport is in my heart till now. I practiced karate for 4 years but nowaday I play volleyball. I think that sports are very useful for the children not just for the physical health but also for their social education above all if they do team sports because they learn how to stay with the others, they learn to respect roles and how manage the conflicts in a group. A thing I have noticed is that people who did sports when they was children will do sports when they will be adults to stay healthy more easily. My advise is: Let's do sports to your children!

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I have played sports for a long time. My first sport was figure skating and I started that when I was 2 and a half and this sport is in my heart till now. I practiced karate for 4 years but nowadays I play volleyball. I think that sports are very useful for the children, not just for the physical health but also for their social education. If they do team sports, they learn how to stay with the others, they learn to respect roles and how to manage the conflicts in a group. Another thing I have noticed is that people who did sports when they were children will do sports when they are adults to stay healthy more easily.
My advice is: Let's do sports with our children!

 

Hello Roberta,

A nice text about sports and your beliefs, I sort of agree with you. I did a lot of sports when I was school age but haven't kept it up, sometimes I wish I had.

 

Just a few small mistakes and a little reworking to make part of it more natural (green)

 

Hope this helps

 

Bob

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