It am preparing for a presentation, please help me to correct it

Machine Learning has given birth to a large rise in intelligent machines, including robots, self-driving cars, virtual artificial intelligence and intelligent secretaries, etc. These intelligent machines  can all be run automatically  or semi-automatically. Virtual artificial assistants such as Google's Now, Microsoft's Cortana and Apple's Siri are getting smarter. Apart from traditional interactive patterns, the new generation of virtual artificial assistants with the aid of language and environment perception (geographical location), can truly become an intelligent agent.

Hello Yuwei

I think this is now corrected to the message you want to give. There are really just a few small mistakes in this but I t hink it was all understandable.

Hope this helps

Bob

I was preparing for a presentation please help me to correct it

Machine learning has given birth to a huge rise of intelligent machines, robots, self-driving cars, including virtual secretaries. These intelligent machines can be run autonomously or semi-autonomously.

Virtual assistants like Google Now, Microsoft's Cortana and Apple's Siri are getting smarter, with forms of traditional interactive patterns, the new generation of virtual assistants will aid language and environment perception (geographical location), and will truly become intelligent agents in the coming future ....