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My sweetheart Ukraine
I live in beautiful country - Ukraine. Earlier when I was a child, I didn't think that this world is so cruel. For you, Ukraine is just a country. It's all the same for the most people. But for me, Ukraine is part of my life, my second mammy.
I was born here. And I cannot see how my Ukraine is pulled to pieces by her sons and our brothers! I believe that my country will burst into flower, gain strength and shine like a star!
Pray for my darling Ukraine.
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My sweetheart, Ukraine
I live in a beautiful country - Ukraine. Earlier, when I was a child, I didn't think that this world is so cruel. For you, Ukraine is just a country. She's nothing special to most people. But for me, Ukraine is part of my life -- my second Mother.
I was born here. And I cannot bear [1] how my Ukraine is being pulled to pieces [2] by her sons and our brothers! I believe that my country shall burst into flower [3], gain strength, and shine like a star!
Pray for my darling Ukraine.
[1] Variant: And I cannot bear to see how my Ukraine......
[2] Variant: ... pulled apart by her sons....
[3] Variants: ... shall burst into bloom, gain strength.... .... shall flower, gain strength, .....
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