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What do you like in weekend? I like weekend cause is the days that I can to do all that I love. I love watch movies. I apreciatte excelent actors and actress, I love movies script, I can watch a movie many times. I watched yesterday a 80` s movie name "Stand by me". This movie I whatched when I was a child. In movie four boys kids walk in a runaway train to find a body. One of two boys asre sensibility and he does the narration. And the body is of a boy that died while blackberry picking. They live in a little city in USA but for the narrator, he says "was the whole world". Is fascinant cause when we watch this movie we have curiosity to see the body. So we follow together boys in a adventure and emocional story about friendship.

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What do you like doing at the weekend?

I like weekends because these are the days that I can do the things that I love doing. I love watching movies. I appreciate excellent actors and actress and I love movie scripts. I can watch a movie many times. I watched an 80' s movie called "Stand by me" yesterday. This movie I watched when I was a child. In the movie four boys climb onto a runaway train to find a body. One of the two boys is sensible and he does the narration. And the body is that of a boy who died while blackberry picking. They live in a little city in the USA but for the narrator, he says "It was the whole world". It is  fascinating because when we watch this movie we are curious to see the body. So we follow the boys together in an adventurous and emotional story about friendship.

 

Hello Lia,

This is a nice text with lots of good information. Remember that when you use a verb of preference (like, love, hate ...) you should use the -ing form of any verb that follows. You have used 'a' in the correct places which is really good but remember that if the next word begins with an a,e,i or some u you should use 'an'. This is not dependent on the noun but the next word, there are 2 examples of this in the text in green.

 

Hope this helps

 

Bob

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What do you like in weekend?

I like the weekend because is they are the days that I can to do all that I love. I love to watch movies. I apreciatte appreciate excelent excellent actors and actress, I love the movie's script, I can watch a movie many times. I watched yesterday a 80` s movie named "Stand by me". This is a movie I whatched watched when I was a child. In the movie four boys kids walk in a runaway train on railroad tracks to find a body. One of the two boys asre are sensibility sensible and he does the narration. And The body is of a boy that died while blackberry picking. They live in a little city in the USA but for the narrator, he says "was the whole world". Is fascinant fascinating because when we watch this movie we have a curiosity to see the body. So we follow together with the boys in a adventure adventurous and emocional emotional story about friendship.


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Great job! It is a very good movie. 

'boys / kids"  = you do not have to say "kids" because we already know "boys" are kids. e.g: a boy is a child, or kid. a man is an adult.

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