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How would you express this freedom, if you would answer.

Freedom is ones ability to act in a way that does not limit ones right to express their beliefs. This is however limited to the safety of those around. In other words taking away someone's free will to allow your form of expression takes away from the other persons freedom.

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Would you help me? Please correct my following sentences.

The question is:
People often say "art is freedom" or "there is freedom in art."
What does this freedom means?

My answer is: / My answer is as follows :

You cannot use a verb before colon , and 'is' is a verb . http://www.answers.com/Q/What_is_a_verb

I think this freedom means that each person has his or her own/ each identity.
An identity grow up a person. Therefore many various expressions exist in the world. ??

How would you define/express this freedom, if you would like to answer.

Freedom has nothing to do with one's identity .Freedom means the power or right to act, speak, or think as one wants without hindrance or restraint.

So, in art , anyone can have the right to express what art means to them, as he or she see it