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Essay for FCE
To my mind it’s much better to do everything together than on your own. It refers to a lot of our activities, when at work or school or doing sports and hobbies.
Working at school, doing projects and taking part in competitions requires many ideas and efforts. The work will be finished quicker and be more productive. Your classmates and you can exchange ideas and brainstorm.
If your friends and you do the same sports together you have a great opportunity to support each other and enjoy your wins. Also, you constantly have many things to talk about.
In addition, dividing your hobby with others will give you a lot of joy and happiness. You can not only be happy with your creations but also create something new and fantastic.
In conclusion, I would like to say, doing things together is wonderful but, on the other hand, you shouldn't forget that doing things together lessens your concentration in reading and homework.
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