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More about me Hi guys, I am Alaa Atef from Egypt. I am a high school student in 11th grade. I am a normal person really my hobbies are drawing, painting, graphic designing, photoshop, making animations, editing videos, modeling 3D and I am starting playing piano soon. I won some competitions in drawing before as I used to be the best artist in my school, but now the thing that I prefer most is the graphic design actually I am now working as a graphic designer for the school pages and some of the school activities. I like listening to music I don't care about the singers I care more about the song itself like I hate Justin Bieber but I still think that his voice is good. I like one direction, one republic, Adele, Rihanna, Tayler Swift, Tori kelly and against the current. I want to mention that I am not so good at sports but I play football and volleyball. I like watching anime, cartoons and of course movies but not the horror ones and not much comedian. I like games I like to be a pro gamer. I play games like assassins' creed, watch dogs wwe and etc. I also play online games like GTA V and league of legends. In the future I wanna be a surgeon as my parents always told me that the wish if I could be a doctor when I graduate. I have precise hands because I can draw so I think I could be a good surgeon but of course I am not gonna ignore my hobby that is the graphic design, so maybe I will be a freelance graphic designer in my free time. II talked about my school before so I think the last thing I am gonna talk about is my traits or personality. I really don't like talking about myself because I will look like an arrogant, so I am ganna say what my friends says about me. They say that I am the most lovely helpful and kind person the they know. All my friends come to me to help not just in homework. I remember one time one of my friends told the others that I remember him with his mother but in school because he always come to me to tell me about his problems and he is not actually my best friend. I used to be the most popular student in primary and preparatory school. I have a lot of friends and I always try my best to help them with anything and anyway I can. I like spending time with mah friends more than my family. and about bad habits I am talkative and sometimes so hyper. Thanks, guys that is all for now I appreciate advice.

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Hi guys, I am Alaa Atef from Egypt. I am a high school student in 11th grade. I am a pretty normal person really. My hobbies are drawing, painting, graphic design, photoshop, making animations, editing videos, modeling 3D and I am starting to learn piano soon. I won some competitions in drawing before, as I used to be the best artist in my school. Now the thing that I prefer most is graphic design. I am now working as a graphic designer for the school, and designing some of the school activities. I like listening to music- I don't care about the singers, I care more about the song itself. I hate Justin Bieber, but I still think that his voice is good. I like One Direction, One Republic, Adele, Rihanna, Taylor Swift, Tori Kelly and Against the Current. I want to mention that I am not very good at sports, but I play football and volleyball. I like watching anime, cartoons and of course movies but not the horror ones or comedy. I like games and I like to be a pro gamer. I play games like Assassins' Creed, Watch Dogs, WWE .etc. I also play online games like GTA V and League of Legends. In the future I wanna be a surgeon, as my parents always told me that they wish I could be a doctor when I graduate. I have precise hands because I can draw, so I think I could be a good surgeon. Of course I am not going to ignore my graphic design hobby, so maybe I will be a freelance graphic designer in my free time. I talked about my school before, so I think the last thing I am going to talk about are my traits and personality. I really don't like talking about myself, because I might look arrogant, so I am going to say what my friends say about me. They say that I am the most lovely, helpful and kind person that they know. All of my friends come to me to help them with homework. I used to be the most popular student in primary and preparatory school. I have a lot of friends, and I always try my best to help them with anything and in anyway I can. I like spending time with my friends more than my family. I am talkative and sometimes hyper, which are my bad habits. Thanks, guys. That is all for now, I appreciate the advice.

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