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Hello frends! It my first record in this notebook! I have recently been studying English. So still do not know how to write and speak. I hope that I would find pen pals to help me learn to be fluent in English. I ask you to correct the mistakes that I made in this text, and in all future texts! I would be grateful to you for help in my study hard! I want to chat! Good day! P.S.: Hopefully, after a while, when he learned the language will laugh at this first recording with a bunch of bugs!)))

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Hello, frends! Here, "friends" is actually in the vocative case. The vocative case is used when you address someone. For instance, "Hello, FRIEND!", "Hello, MOM.", "Hey, YOU!" etc. A comma is required between a phrase like "Hello" and a noun in the vocative case. :)

 

This is the first entry in my notebook! I have recently been studying English. Or "I have been studying English recently." Putting "recently" at the end adds less emphasis, in my opinion. So I still don't "Don't" is more common than "do not" in American English. "Do not" can add a lot of emphasis to a sentence. know how to write and speak (fluently). I hope that I will "Will" sounds more natural here, especially in conversation American English. :) find some pen pals to help me learn how to be fluent in English. "To help me become fluent in English" and "pen pals who will help me become fluent in English" sound a lot better. I ask you to correct the mistakes that I've made in this text, and in all future texts! I would be very grateful for your help in my studies!


I want to chat! Good day!
P.S.: Hopefully, after a while, when I've learned enough of the language, we'll laugh at this first entry with all of its errors! :) :) :) Americans write ":)", not ")".

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Hello, freinds!

 

This is the first entry in my notebook! I have been studying English recently. So I still don't know how to write and speak. Find some pen pals to help me learn how to be fluent in English. I ask you to correct the mistakes that I've made in this text, and in all future texts! I would be very grateful for your help in my studies!
I want to chat! Good day!


P.S.: Hopefully, after a while, when l've learned enough of the language, we'll laugh at this first entry with all of its errors!:)

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этот текст нужно было разместить в английской ветке чтобы носители увидели. А так в принципе нормально написано
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Hello frends!

It my first record in this notebook!
I have recently been studying English. So still do not know how to write and speak. I hope that I would find pen pals to help me learn to be fluent in English. I ask you to correct the mistakes that I made in this text, and in all future texts! I would be grateful to you for help in my study hard!
I want to chat! Besides, I can teach you Russian language! Will be fun)))Good day!
P.S.: Hopefully, after a while, when he learned the language will laugh at this first recording with a bunch of bugs!)))

 

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