The importance of helping children in your community

When I think about helping children in my community, I think of it as a way to build a better world, with better people. Today, because of technology, I see parents and children without dialogue, I see children having been raised without loving parents. A child needs to many things during the childhood, such as attention, love, and, mainly (note: "most importantly" would sound better here instead of mainly), a person who asks every day: "Hi honey, how was your day today?" Being a parent is a great responsibility, because is above all necessary (note: I don't think this is wrong, but it "above all" is usually used when you list some things first and then say that this one is the most important, so it sounds kind of odd here.) to learn to say: no. Besides (note: maybe you could combine this sentence with the top one: Besides knowning the hour to put the kids to bed and how to read good stories, it's also extremely important to learn how to say "no.") knowing the hour to put the kids to bed and of course to read stories. Today, the family ties are fragile, so it's necessary to have interaction with the community; sometimes parents need other people to help them raising their kids. The community can help with the upbringing of the children, it can and give(note: usually it's better to say "provide" in this context) love and affection. The parents and the community should to work together to punish punishment when it was necessary and give love all the time.

The importance of helping children in your community

When I think about helping children in my community I know that it is a way to build a better world, with better people. Today, because of technology, I see parents and children not speaking to eachother without dialogue, I see children that have been raised without loving parents. A child needs to many things during the childhood, such as: attention, love, and mainly a person who asks every day: "Hi honey, How was your day today?" Being parents is a great responsibility, because above all it is necessary to learn to say no. Besides knowing the hour to put the kids to bed and of course to read stories. Today, family ties are fragile, so there needs to be an intervention in the community. Sometimes parents need other people to help them raise their kids. The community can help with the upbringing of the children, it can give love and affection. The parents and the community should work together towards giving punishment when it is necessary and giving love all the time.

Great Work Vanessa!