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On the Importance of Teamwork In the picture, a man is carrying the bricks and two mans are carrying more bricks, which is states the difference between teamwork and working alone.And the picture shows us a person's effort is additive and a team's effect is the multiplication effect. Today, many people are only child and they don't have strong awareness of teamwork.If a group of people are not be a team, they will not reach their goal quickly and efficiently.So, to build up awareness of teamwork is also important. With the development of the society, the importance of teamwork is regarded as significant by people.There are many companies develop themselves by seeking business partners to reach their mutual goal and interest.Living in the society, just like a football game, it has to a complete team effort and not just a game of individuals.A team effort's is the multiplication effect.

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On the Importance of Teamwork

In the picture, a man is carrying some bricks and two men are carrying more bricks, which portrays the difference between teamwork and working alone. The picture also shows us that an individual's effort is additive, whereas a team's effort has a multiplication effect.
Today, many people are only children, and they don't have strong awareness of teamwork. If a group of people are not working as a team, they will not reach their goal quickly and efficiently. So, to build up awareness of teamwork is also important.
With the development of the society, the importance of teamwork is regarded as significant by most people. There are many companies developing themselves by seeking business partners to reach their mutual goals and interests. Living in a society is just like a football game; it has to be a complete team effort and not just a game of individuals. A team effort's has the multiplication effect.

 

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Hooray for teamwork! Very well written, good job. :)

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