She took credit for something she hadn't done

.Chapter 7. How Mother Took Credit for Something She hadn’t done.

Bruno continues in his aim of finding something interesting for killing the time. He is looking for a tyre and a rope which he can make a swing with (I would say.... with which he could make a swing) so he asks Lieutenant Kotler for a favour. Kotler is a young serious good -looking soldier. Despite of the soldier’s good outlook, which only Greetel seems to have noticed as far as she is flirting with him, Kotler is a very arrogant show-off and a very mean person. He traits roughly Pavel He treats Pavel roughly. who Pavel is the person charged to in charge of cooking and buying the groceries for the house’s house supplies. Pavel helps Bruno to find a good tyre, so the kid child could make a good swing.
Everything is going ok, until Bruno falls down off the swing and has is wounded. injured.  He has some scratches, a nasty cut and a wide bleeding gash. Pavel, who was close enough to Bruno, to be seeing to see the danger, inmediately goes to help the young boy. He gently cleans and disinfects the cuts gently. Bruno is impressed, how could a cook do it so well? . Pavel confess to him, that he used to be a doctor however he is not anymore. When mums arrives, she feels grateful with for Pavel’s help, although she tells Pavel that if someone’s asks for what happened there, she wants it to be known that she is the one who has helped Bruno. In fact, she wants to take credit for something she hadn’t done.

Did you mean to say.......Despite the soldiers good looks?   I didnºt quite undertand this sentencce.

Well done, it was a difficult piece of writing but you did it well.

She took credit for something she hadn't done

.Chapter 7. How Mother Took Credit for Something She hadn’t done.

Bruno continues in his aim of finding searching for (it sounds more natural this way) something interesting for killing the to kill time. He is looking for a tire and a rope with which he can make a swing, and he decides to ask Lieutenant Kotler for a favour.

*the break in the writing here helps with the fluidity. It was kind of choppy and confusing as one paragraph*

Kotler is a young, serious, and good-looking soldier. However, in spite of these good attributes, (which only Greetel seems to have noticed, as far as she flirts with him constantly) Kotler is a very arrogant, pompous (this basically means show-off, but is much more eloquent), and very mean malicious (again, just a more sophisticated way of saying what you wanted to) person. He treats Pavel - who is the person in charge of cooking and buying the house's groceries for the house’s supplies - mercilessly.

Pavel helps Bruno to find a good tire, so the kid he could make a good swing. Everything is going ok until Bruno falls down off the swing and has wounded wounds himself. He has some scratches, a nasty cut and a wide, quickly bleeding gash. Pavel, who was being close as he was to Bruno, to be seeing the danger, immediately goes to help the young boy. He cleans and disinfects the cuts gently. Bruno is impressed, thinking to himself "how could a cook do it so well?". Pavel, seemingly reading his mind, mentions that he used to be a doctor however he is not anymore (this is redundant, as it is implied).

When mum arrives, she's grateful for Pavel’s help, but she tells Pavel that if anyone asks for what happened there, he's to say that she was the one who had helped Bruno. When in fact, all that she had really done for the child was nothing at all she wants to take credit for something she hadn’t done.  (The last line you had written sounded a bit awkward)

I'm sorry if you didn't want it corrected this much! I did get a bit carried away, and a lot of changes were made for fluency in the story, and not necessarily for proper grammar. I hope this was helpful (-: