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A crazy day Today is November 11th, In China called singles day, It is a festival for single men and women. On this day, people will crazy shopping, and also called TaoBao's day or MaYun's day. TaoBao is a shopping website, founded by Ma Yun, the Asia-Pacific region is a large network of retail, business district. So today is the big day abd a crazy day.

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A crazy day

Today is November 11th, In China it is called Singles Day, It is a festival for single men and women.
On this day, people will go crazy shopping, and it is also called TaoBao's day or MaYun's day. TaoBao is a shopping website, founded by Ma Yun. The Asia-Pacific region is a large network of retail and business districts.
So today is a  big day and a crazy day.

 

Hello Nichole,

It is a crazy day, on the news here they said that in the first 90 minutes Alibaba had sold US$5Bn worth of products.

 

Just a few small mistakes - Singles Day is a proper noun so it should begin with capital (big) letters. Also be careful with 'a', 'a' means one of many.

 

Hope this helps

 

Bob

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Japanease news has reported about Chinese net market right now. People who take charge of Chat are amazing!

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