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My home - Siberia
I live in Siberia. In a place, where the plains end and the mountains start. Where the birch forest turns to coniferous taiga. I live in small town in the south of the Kemerovo region. The size of the town from the east to west is not more then 1000 meters. The size of my town is limited by small mountains in the East and by a small river in the West. There is almost no wind. The white smoke from the tubes of the local power plant goes up almost always vertically up to the sky. I have lived here for only four years, but I loved this place at this time. There are many places on the mountain to ski. I learned to skiing, but that is another story.
Hello Maxim,
This is a really nice description of the place where you live. There are just a few mistakes, mainly of style and there are a few missing verbs. If we talk about something which started in the past and continues up to now we often use the present perfect - have/has + past participle.
Hope this helps
Bob
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