The Parks of Xinjiang

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当你去乌鲁木齐的时候，你得逛人民公园。

那个地方有很多人。在池子(里)游泳啦，踢足球啦，吃东西啦，听音乐啦, 公园(里)的人都喜欢做。What do you want to express here using 喜欢做？

对新疆人来说, 食物和家庭非常重要。 你可以在公园看到家人一起玩儿，吃东西，聊天。 You need a subject here in this sentence.
如果你在公园想骑自行车的话，就租赁辆自行车。骑自行车的人很多，而且自行车道很热闹。自行车道也很干净，很安全。
来人民公园, 欢迎你来人民公园! 公园是最便宜的景点!

‘To visit’:
Use 去 for big places (like a city).
Use 逛 for smaller places (like a park or store).
Use 见 for a person.

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The Parks of Xinjiang

I wrote a notebook entry similar to this before. This is an updated version, as I am using the website again!
My friend already checked many things for me. Any more suggestions?


当你去乌鲁木齐的时候，你得逛人民公园。

那个地方有很多人。在池子(里)游泳啦，踢足球啦，吃东西啦，听音乐啦, 公园(里)的人都喜欢做。 对新疆人来说, 食物和家庭非常重要。 可以在公园看到家人一起玩儿，吃东西，聊天。
如果你在公园想骑自行车的话，就租赁自行车。骑自行车的人很多，而且自行车道很热闹。自行车道也很干净，很安全。
来人民公园, 欢迎你! 公园是最便宜的景点!

‘To visit’:
Use 去 for big places (like a city).
Use 逛 for smaller places (like a park or store). 【it's not about the size, it's walk around casually . to visit a museum -->参观博物馆】
Use 见 for a person. 【more formally, 拜访】