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First notebook entry: Introducing myself hello everyone .my name is chenlei .i am 23 years old and i come from wenzhou zhejiang china .i think i am an outgoing and hardworking boy .now i am an student in the university and i like to do some sports in my free time such as basketball and table-tennis.ofcourse i like english very much .my major is INTERNATIONAL ECONOMY AND TRADE,so english is very important to me .and another reason i want to learn it because i think it is a very interesting and cool language,i just like it .so that is why i want to learn english with you and i hope you can be my friends .so we can learn each other.thank you !!

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello everyone. My name is Chenlei. I am 23 years old and I come from wenzhou zhejiang China.
When you use "I", don't forget you have to capitalize it everytime you use it!

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think I am an outgoing and hardworking boy.
Now I am an student at the university (of -university name-) and i like to practice some sports in my free time such as basketball and table tennis.
When the noun starts with a consonant (S from student), you almost always use "a". If the noun starts with a vowel (A from Apple), you use "an".
Also, if you want to say you are a student AT the university, people often add what university they are in.
And finally, you "practice sports", "doing sports" isn't used often.


Of course I like English very much.
Languages are capitalized, here it's "English".

My major is INTERNATIONAL ECONOMY AND TRADE, so English is very important for me. and Another reason i want to learn it because i think it is a very interesting and cool language, I just like it. So that is why i want to learn English with you and. I hope you can be my friends so we can learn each other. Thank you !!
Making lines shorter and not using "and" too often makes your text easier to read.


Hope I helped a bit, it's nice to meet you Chenlei! ;-)

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