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If only I have 48 hours a day!!!! Today is the beginning of a week but I am so tired as a result of last busy weekends . I had to preparing the upcoming test and the assignment at the same time ! What is worse , deadline is coming too, I have no idea when these hectic days will end . My major is animation,and my assignment is making a short animation requiring a group to finish. At the beginning ,my partners and I were so excited because we would finally have our own flick. However,it was not a easy task especially when we lacked of experience . Up to now ,it has been still a mess . I hope I can get over these problems.

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If only I have 48 hours a day!!!!

Today is the beginning of a week but I am so tired as a result of my busy weekend. I had to prepare for the upcoming test and the assignment at the same time! What is worse, my deadline is coming too, I have no idea when these hectic days will end. My major is animation,and my assignment is to make a short animation requiring a group to finish. At the beginning, my partners and I were so excited because we would finally have our own flick. However, it was not an easy task especially when we lacked experience. Up to now, it has still been  a mess. I hope I can get over these problems.

 

Hello 雨润,

it's a pity when you lose a weekend because you  are so busy with your studies. You need to have a meeting with the rest of your group to decide what to do with your film. There are just a few corrections with the English and I have rewritten two sections to make them more natural.

 

Hope this helps

 

Bob

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Thanks!! Indeed I was too anxious. I should try to reasonably arrange time ...
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Don't worry about it, as he uses to say, Bod Marley, don't worry, be happy...I am sure that you would find the solutions to all issues!!!

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