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A weekend When a weekend comes, I always have no idea to kill the free time in Changchun for business trip. After finished today's vocabulary task on BaiCiZhan an App for remembering vocabulary, I decided to go to super mall two kilometers away from my hotel to look up some new dishes for my dinner. After dinner, I thought I could watch a film for my own entertainment. My comments about the film I watched followed: It is a terrific film based on a real story about a group of people tried to conquer the mountain Alps. They succeeded in standing at the peak of it, but they could not safely get down of it to the camp when the storm sporadically stroke the mountain. When everything went back to peace, some bodies inhabited. The scenery was so impressive and beautiful, but the story was really touching and helpless. We are so small when we face the mountain, and we are so weak when we try to challenge the nature. We could not let others help but ourselves, or many people may be endangered by ours. A good film.

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A weekend

When a weekend comes, I always have no idea to kill the free time in Changchun for business trip. After finished today's vocabulary task on BaiCiZhan an App for remembering vocabulary, I decided to go to super mall two kilometers away from my hotel to look up some new dishes for my dinner. After dinner, I thought I could watch a film for my own entertainment. My comments about the film I watched followed:

It is a terrific film based on a real story about a group of people tried to conquer the mountain Everest. They succeeded in standing at the peak of it, but they could not safely get down of it to the camp when the storm sporadically stroke the mountain. When everything went back to peace, some bodies inhabited.

The scenery was so impressive and beautiful, but the story was really touching and helpless. We are so small when we face the mountain, and we are so weak when we try to challenge the nature. We could not let others help but ourselves, or many people may be endangered by ours.
A good film.

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