I went to the animal hospital.

Hi✧
I finised my work, I took a King to the animal hospital to get its annual checkup.
His right eye can't see. It's a hereditary disease.
When he He was 1 years old, He had sursery surgery.
He is looks fine.
I want to he gets him to get old slowly.
He is 9, but he looks like younger than he really is.

Thank you for reading.
If you find a mistake in my notebook, could you correct it?

Thank you.

I went to the animal hospital.

Hi✧
I finished my work, I took King to the animal hospital to get his annual checkup. He can't see out of his right eye. It's a hereditary disease.
When he was 1 year old, He had surgery. He looks fine. I want him to get old slowly.
He is 9, but he looks younger than he really is.

Thank you for reading.
If you find a mistake in my notebook, could you correct it?

Thank you.

Hello Mizuki,

I am glad that King is healthy. He looks like quite a small dog so he may well live for many more years. There are just a few mistakes and several words that I took out where you haven't quite got the right expression.

Hope this helps

Bob

I went to the animal hospital.

Hi✧
I finised my After work, I took a King to the animal hospital to have his  get its annual checkup.
He has a hereditary disease, and can't see out of his right eye can't see. It's hereditary disease.
When he was 1 years old, he had surgery.
He is looks fine.
I want him to get to he gets old slowly.
He is 9, but he looks like younger than he really is.

Thank you for reading.
If you find a mistake in my notebook, could you correct it?

Thank you.

I went to the animal hospital.

Hi✧
I finished my work, and then I took a(since King is his name, you don't need to put a) King to the animal hospital to get its his annual checkup.
His right eye can't see. It's hereditary disease.
When he was 1 a(you can say 1 but, a flows more naturally) year old, he had surgery.
He is looks(is or looks, either one works) fine.
I want to he gets old slowly. (a little confusing, maybe say,"I want him to get old slowly," or i want him to age slowly")
He is 9, but he looks like younger than he really is.

Thank you for reading.
If you find a mistake in my notebook, could you correct it?

Thank you.

みずきさんの映画は上手です！がんばります。

みずきさんの犬はかわいいです。