My new friend
My futher brings to me a box. There was a puppy. It is white colour. I did dream about it always. I did give the name him. It is a girl. Her name is Sandra. She likes to walk to the park very much. She have many toys. I very love her. I bought mini-home for her. She sleeps very long time and wake up very early. She is 4 months now. Learning the commands. We know so commands as - setdown, voice, to walk and not may.
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My new friend
My father brought me a box. There was a puppy inside. It is white. I always dreamed about this. I gave it a name. It is a girl. Her name is Sandra. She really likes to walk in the park. She has many toys. I really love her. I bought a mini-home for her. She sleeps a very long time and wakes up very early. She is 4 months old now and learning commands. She knows commands such as - sit down, voice, walk and no.
Hello Regina,
This is a really nice text about your new friend. Lots of information and well laid out.
There are a few mistakes mainly with very forms and I think it is better to use 'really' instead of 'very much'. Next time try to make the shorter sentences into longer ones by using connectors like 'and' and 'but'.
Hope this helps
Bob
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Nice attempt though there are spelling mistakes.
Futher = father
I very love her = I love her very much
she go to bed early and also wake up early.
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Help me please)
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