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Daily activity Everyday I wake up at 5.00 AM, and then I go to bathroom for take a wudhu after that I am pray and the I clean my bedroom and I am preparing a breakfast for my parents and we have breakfast, and then I drove my mother in the market and I back to home for preparing going to work.

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Everyday I wake up at 5.00 AM, and then I go to bathroom for take a wudhu after that I am pray and the I clean my bedroom and. Then I am preparing prepare a breakfast for my parents and we have breakfast eat. and Then I drove drive my mother in to the market and I back to home for preparing prepare going to work.

 

IMO too many "and", better split in different sentances and put some connecting words. For example instead of

"I am preparing a breakfast for my parents and we have breakfast and I drove my mother in to the market"

can make:

"I prepare a breakfast for my parents. After we finish breakfast, I drive my mother in to the market"

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