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Describing a Scenery: Mt. Fuji (1) I live in an apartment with a view of Mt. Fuji. Even though it is so far about 80 kilometers southwest of my home, I can still enjoy that it appears vary time to time, day to day, and season to season. I took the picture below in the twilight last January. The silhouette of the mountain was impressive in the contrast with the sunset glow left along the horizon and the darkening blue sky. Can you see the two stars just above the mountain? The brighter one is Venus, and the other is Mercury. At that time, they came closer each other. ***************************************** Thank you for reading this entry. I would be very grateful if you can fix and improve this writing. Any comments would be also appreciated.

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Describing a Scene: Mt. Fuji (1)

I live in an apartment with a view of Mt. Fuji. Even though it is far ,about 80 kilometers southwest of my home, I can still enjoy that it appears to vary time to time, day to day, and season to season.

I took the picture below in the twilight last January. The silhouette of the mountain was impressive in the contrast with the sunset glow left along the horizon and the darkening blue sky. Can you see the two stars just above the mountain? The brighter one is Venus, and the other is Mercury. At that time, they came closer to each other.

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Thank you for reading this entry. I would be very grateful if you can fix and improve this writing. Any comments would also be appreciated.

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Describing a Scenery: Mt. Fuji (1)

I live in an apartment with a view of Mt. Fuji. Even though it is so far, about 80 kilometers southwest of my home, I still enjoy watching it change from day to day, and season to season.

I took the picture below in twilight last January. The silhouette of the mountain was impressive in the contrast with the sunset glow left along the horizon and the darkening blue sky. Can you see the two stars just above the mountain? The brighter one is Venus, and the other is Mercury. At that time, they came close to each other.

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Thank you for reading this entry. I would be very grateful if you can fix and improve this writing. Any comments would be also appreciated.

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Thank you, singingwhilewalk-san. As you said, we have many places called "富士見---". The mountain is getting covered with snow nowadays.
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This picture is so wonderful .It is said that in Japan ,some places are called "富士見"because of having a view of Mt.Fuji.I have senn many beautiful pictures of Mt.Fuji: covered with white snow or standing in contrast against cherry blosooms.but in this picture Mt.Fuji looks so great.really the tallest mountain in Japan.

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