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my first diary 06/11/2015 Today is the six of November two thousand and fifteen , I decided that I should keep a diary if fact my mother tongue is Arabic but I think righting in English is better . It makes me more comfortable , so here I'm Today is my ex boyfriends birthday I don't think I still love him , but it's not that easy to forget him and to act like we've never been together so i've sent him a message to wish him a happy birthday . He didn't reply yet , I don't think he would ever reply . That makes me feel bad . We've separated a week ago . he may not forget me that soon . I knew him five years ago , he was my best friend . We start dating last year . I really loved him He's so romantic and funny , he's stupid sometimes . I loved the way he smiles with he's adorable white teeth . I loved everything about him , but he changed . I knew that he still love his ex girlfriend , but I wished that some day he'll love me . That didn't happen . he just left me . I cried a lot but I could get over that . It still hurts when I think about all that time we past together , all our trials and loughers . But there's nothing I can do now . All I have to do is waiting for a reply that i'll never receive .

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my first diary

06/11/2015
Today is the 6th* of November 2015* , I decided that I should keep a diary. In fact my mother tongue is Arabic but I think writing in English is better. It makes me more comfortable, so here I am.**
Today is my ex-boyfriend's birthday. I don't think I still love him, but it's not that easy to forget him and to act like we've never been ("we were never" sounds more natural here) together, so I've sent him a message to wish him a happy birthday . He hasn't replied yet. I don't think he would ever reply. That makes me feel bad . We've separated a week ago. He may not forget me that soon ("I don't think he's forgotten me that quickly" sounds more natural). I knew him five years ago. He was my best friend. We start dating last year. I really loved him.
He's so romantic and funny. He's stupid sometimes. I loved the way he smiles with his adorable white teeth. I loved everything about him, but he changed. I knew that he still loved his ex-girlfriend, but I wished that some day he'd love me. That didn't happen. He just left me. I cried a lot but I can get over that. It still hurts when I think about all that time we spent together , all our trials and laughter . But there's nothing I can do now. All I have ("can" sounds more natural) to do is waiting for a reply that I'll never receive.

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*You wrote out the numbers correctly, but dates are not written like that in English; we just use the actual digits instead of words.

**The contraction "I'm" is only really used when followed by something:
I'm hungry/I'm washing my car/I'm in the mood for a cookie/etc

Hopefully I haven't missed anything..!

Breakups are tough. But you will bounce back. If he really was a best friend then I don't think he intended to be mean to you or anything, and I assume he probably has complicated feelings about it too. (Or if he doesn't care then he wouldn't have been a very good boyfriend anyway!) I hope you feel better about the whole situation soon.
Your English is good, though. I can completely understand you and there are only little mistakes here and there. Once you get the hang of those, you'll be doing very well indeed!

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my first diary

06/11/2015
Today is the six of November two thousand and fifteen , Nov 5, 2015. I decided that I should keep a diary. if fact my My mother tongue is Arabic but I think righting writing in English is better. It makes me more comfortable, so here I'm I go.
Today is my ex-boyfriend's birthday. I don't think I still love him, but it's not that easy to forget him and to act like we've never been we were never together so I've sent him a message to wish him a happy birthday. He didn't hasn't reply replied yet. I don't think he would will ever reply. That makes me feel bad. We've separated a week ago. he may not forget me that soon*. I knew met him five years ago. He was my best friend. We start dating last year. I really loved him.
He's so romantic and funny. He's stupid sometimes. I loved the way he smiles with he's his adorable white teeth. I loved everything about him, but he changed. I knew that he still loved his ex girlfriend, but I wished that some day he'll he'd love me. That didn't happen. He just left me. I cried a lot but I could can get over that it. It still hurts when I think about all that time we past spent together, all our trials and loughers**. But there's nothing I can do now. All I have to there is to do is waiting wait for a reply that I'll never receive.

 

* I can't figure out how to correct this, but it doesn't sound like natural English to me.

** I don't know what word you're trying to use here. Laughter?

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