Report: Making improvements with languages in language learning

INTRODUCTION
The principal aim of this report is to provide an outline of the situation of the multimedia centre at a language school called Highford Academy and to suggest how it could be improved thanks to possible improvements based on students’ the opinions of students.

CURRENT SITUATION
Students of the school responded to an online questionnaire that I created by me in order to investigate their grade degree of satisfaction about with the school’s equipment.

First a large proportion of those *[informants said that there are few possibilities to use desktops provided for the multimedia centre because there aren’t enough in relation with the great number of people who should have right to take advantage of them.]* respondents said that the desktops provided to the multimedia centre are in limited supply relative to the number of people who need them.

Secondly, most of the computers *[are broken some users are not able to manage with them and surfing the Net without reasoning you can risk to take virus that block the system.]* have been broken by users that do not know how to properly use them, leading to infection by viruses while surfing the Net.  

RECOMMENDATIONS
Taking Considering all these facts mentioned into account and seen the great potentiality of a multimedia study centre, surely the educational institution should take into account these complaints and reinvest in this area.
In that direction I suggest to order ordering some other more state-of-the-art desktops and at the same time, restructuring reorganize the use of technological supplies. For per example, providing a controller for the room and a web section or a schedule where booking establishing a schedule for reserving a laptop in a set time.
These proposals should help to avoid prevent any misunderstandingS and make this different improve the efficiency of this way of learning works well. 

Elisa--Overall, nicely done. This is a difficult topic. The main critiques are that the sentences marked * are too verbose and unclear.

1. Green - preferred way of stating your point more concisely.

2. "Satisfaction" - usually followed by "with;"  e.g. I am satisfied with my grade.

3. "In that direction" - It makes sense, but I have never heard this said. Maybe consider: "With these goals in view,..."

I hope you do not find that I have been too harsh. If my corrections to not reflect your meaning, you can submit it again and I'll review it again. A presto!!