Search from various English teachers...
Spain flagToni
Little story Tom and sally arrive cycling to the beach to spend the whole day tanning and relaxing to recharge energy for the following week. They are having lunch when it is start raining, the people who are in the beach use the sun umbrellas as an umbrellas and go back home. Tom and Sally decide to wait in the beach instead of take their bicycles to go home. Cycling they are going to be wetter than waiting there. Finally, it is stop raining and the sun is shining again. They are alone in the beach so happy with the decision to wait until the rain stops. It seems that they are in a desert island listening the sound of the sea in peace.

Corrections · 6

0

Little story

Tom and Sally cycled to the beach to spend the whole day tanning and relaxing to recharge their energy for the following week.
They are having lunch when it is started raining, the people who are on the beach use the sun umbrellas as an umbrellas and go back home.
Tom and Sally decide to wait on the beach instead of getting their bicycles to go home. If they cycle they are going to be wetter than waiting there.
Finally, it is stops raining and the sun is shines again. They are alone in the beach so happy with their decision to wait until the rain stops. It seems like they are on a desert island listening to the sound of the sea in peace.

 

Hello Toni,

A nice story. A few little problems with tenses and remember a/an = 1 so you can not use it with a plural noun! (umbrellas)

 

Hope this helps

 

Bob

0

A little story

Tom and Sally arrive by bike at cycling to the beach to spend the whole day tanning and relaxing, to recharge their energy for the following week.
They are having lunch when it is starts raining, the people who are on the beach use their sun umbrellas to as an umbrellas and go back home.
Tom and Sally decide to wait on the beach instead of take riding their bicycles to go home.If they cycle  Cycling they are going to be wetter than waiting there.
Finally, it is stopped raining and the sun shone  is shining again. They are alone on the beach and so happy with the decision to wait until the rain stopped. It seems that they are on a desert island, listening  to the sound of the sea in peace.

Want to progress faster?

Join this learning community and try out free exercises!

Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!

Start Learning Today