My first notebook entry!

Hello everyone.

This is my first notebook entry ever! I'm a native Spanish speaker looking for a job in the USA. Because I need to improve my English conversational skills and, as such, I decided to become a part of the Italki family. I don't know yet how to use this tool yet, but I'm sure that I'll take advantage of this platform.

I'm not sure if someone is going to read this, but if the answer is yes, please feel free to correct my mistakes.

I hope the best for all of you in your learning process.

Rafael

Your written English is okay overall.  I made a few corrections in order to give you another perspective on writing the sentences.  Watch the overuse of exclamation marks (!).  Exclamation marks can be effective if used in a sudden declaration or a surprise but, if overused, they lose their effectiveness within the grammatical structure of English discourse. 

Hello everyone,

This is my first-ever notebook entry! I'm a native Spanish speaker looking for a job in the USA, and because I need to improve my conversation skills, I’ve decided to join the italki family!
I’m not quite sure how to use this tool but I hope to take advantage of this platform. Hopefully, someone will read this! Please feel free to correct my mistakes. I hope the best for all of you on your ongoing language journey.

Rafael